Morningstar Visions (Part 5)

Crystallized desert
Yellow umbrellas shall rise
And weasel shaped dimes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Poddar Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 6:15 AM
Nothing can really match the visual floodgate this poem has opened.
Chircop Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 2:13 PM
beautiful
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May 29, 2009 at 4:40 PM
Interesting images carry your thoughts in this poem. Strong opening line captured my attention right away. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us. Have a nice weekend. Karen
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