Morningstar Visions (Part 2)

Cloudy particles
Build up greenish, sunny rose
Soup-consuming void
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 7:42 AM
Your eyes are like that of a chemist in a futuristic lab ... I mean you are exploding conventions in the creation of the new.
Moreno Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 11:03 PM
Nice work, love the opening line. I'm sponsoring a haiku contest, if you'd like to enter...Raul
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May 17, 2009 at 3:45 PM
This is a winner my friend...lines two and three are amazing.
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May 17, 2009 at 11:17 AM
Aha! This is truly amazing Cesar keep on writting my friend for your pen has a heart of its own! - jeremias
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