Morningstar Visions (Part 12)

Botany dome cracks
Spoken fingertip softness
Bounce rational gap
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Knop Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 10:29 PM
I like your "Botany dome cracks"! Great Haiku and chose of words. Thank you also for commenting "Wege, die sich nicht kreuzen". Do you also speak German? Keep your pen flowing! Saludos...Gert
Moreno Avatar
September 12, 2009 at 12:47 PM
The alliteration and imagery make this haiku, nice work...Raul
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September 11, 2009 at 5:59 PM
Creative use of imagery for an interesting perspective. I like the alliteration. Keep on writing. Karen
Kendrick Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 4:35 PM
Interesting Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
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September 11, 2009 at 7:14 AM
wonderful haiku.... keeep writing. you are great. Adeleke
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