Morningstar Visions (Part 11)

Parabolic view
Flickering stairway obtuse
Marble-knock-wood code
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Knop Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 2:57 PM
I like your Haiku, Cesar. It's very well observed. And thaky for your comment, Gert
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August 16, 2009 at 12:04 PM
Interesting a creative use of this concise poem giving the reader something to think about. Keep on writing! Karen
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August 15, 2009 at 3:37 PM
Cesar, you have quite a talent for describing architecture. Excellent! Love, Carolyn
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August 14, 2009 at 5:01 PM
Witty words of view, Sincerely Moses
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August 14, 2009 at 10:01 AM
Interesting Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
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