Morningstar Visions (Part 10)

Wall pattern commons
Bubble digital thought scheme
Jellyfish minded
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 3:36 PM
Awesome image, Cesar! A very creative comparison with the jellyfish. Love, Carolyn
Orozco Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 3:41 PM
Great imagery
Coles Avatar
August 11, 2009 at 8:05 AM
Nothing I love more than innocent words coming together and creating a new vision - powerfully written!
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August 10, 2009 at 12:58 PM
Interesting fusion of images for a creative view. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us. Karen
Brown Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 9:40 AM
What a wonderful way to start a new week reading your new poetry Cesar.Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
Chircop Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 7:36 AM
well penned indeed--charma
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 6:58 AM
Nicely written Haiku. Not sure what thought that you wanted to send. Sara
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