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Morning's So Much Nicer

~ Morning’s so much nicer ever since you came along A chilly breeze, it sings to me its sweet October song The sunrise, as if lemonade is poured upon the sky A fluffy cloud soars like a dove as it goes floating by Dew drops glisten brightly, tiny diamonds on the lawn Bluebirds sing in harmony with this melodic dawn Butterflies awaken with the colors of the day Fallen leaves of red and gold, a wondrous fall display Brushstrokes paint horizons in a shade of tangerine Pathways lead a special place in this euphoric scene Everything is beautiful and nothing can go wrong Morning’s so much nicer ever since you came along ~

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Midnight Aurora

Date: 10/27/2019 6:24:00 PM

Beautiful again. Amazing how one can light up another's life like that.

Chris Green
Date: 10/28/2019 8:02:00 AM

Thank you, what a nice thing to say.

Hello There

Date: 10/25/2019 12:30:00 AM

Can't complain about October's chill after reading this. It's such a pleasant tune ~ so uplifting! With a perfect cadence ~ Nice job, Chris!

Chris Green
Date: 10/28/2019 8:02:00 AM

Thank you my friend so very much. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

Pat Adams

Date: 10/24/2019 2:57:00 PM

This is a FAV for me! It is worded and rhymed perfectly. Really brings the reader there. This definitely sounds like a song to me. I love it! Very well done!.........pat

Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2019 3:37:00 PM

Thanks again Pat. Funny you should say that, I had a melody in my head that I wrote this one to.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/24/2019 10:08:00 AM

A beauty Chris! I like...The sunrise as if lemonade is poured upon the sky. That brings me right to it. I enjoyed this :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2019 10:33:00 AM

Thank you Heidi and good morning. I appreciate you my friend.

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/24/2019 9:15:00 AM

this is beautiful my friend, you paint the october mornings brilliantly...we had diamonds on the lawn this morning and frost on the windshields...i am not ready for this cold weather...your poem however was a delight to read, it flows wonderfully... :) hugs

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/24/2019 1:05:00 PM

My daughter’s name came from a morning like this. “ Krystyl Dawn “

Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2019 10:32:00 AM

Thank you Sandy, I am thrilled you enjoyed this one. Diamonds on the lawn, I imagine that was beautiful but way too cold. : )

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/24/2019 9:05:00 AM

Very nice Chris! You do have a way of making mornings a little bit nicer.

Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2019 10:31:00 AM

Thanks so very much Brenda for your kind thoughts.