Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Morning's So Much Nicer

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Morning’s so much nicer
ever since you came along
A chilly breeze, it sings to me
its sweet October song

The sunrise, as if lemonade
is poured upon the sky
A fluffy cloud soars like a dove
as it goes floating by

Dew drops glisten brightly,
tiny diamonds on the lawn
Bluebirds sing in harmony
with this melodic dawn

Butterflies awaken
with the colors of the day
Fallen leaves of red and gold,
a wondrous fall display

Brushstrokes paint horizons
in a shade of tangerine
Pathways lead a special place
in this euphoric scene

Everything is beautiful
and nothing can go wrong
Morning’s so much nicer
ever since you came along

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Midnight Aurora October 27, 2019 at 6:24 PM Beautiful again. Amazing how one can light up another's life like that. Chris Green October 28, 2019 at 8:02 AM Thank you, what a nice thing to say.

Hello There October 25, 2019 at 12:30 AM Can't complain about October's chill after reading this. It's such a pleasant tune ~ so uplifting! With a perfect cadence ~ Nice job, Chris! Chris Green October 28, 2019 at 8:02 AM Thank you my friend so very much. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

Pat Adams October 24, 2019 at 2:57 PM This is a FAV for me! It is worded and rhymed perfectly. Really brings the reader there. This definitely sounds like a song to me. I love it! Very well done!.........pat Chris Green October 24, 2019 at 3:37 PM Thanks again Pat. Funny you should say that, I had a melody in my head that I wrote this one to.

Heidi Sands October 24, 2019 at 10:08 AM A beauty Chris! I like...The sunrise as if lemonade is poured upon the sky. That brings me right to it. I enjoyed this :) Chris Green October 24, 2019 at 10:33 AM Thank you Heidi and good morning. I appreciate you my friend.

Sandra Adams October 24, 2019 at 9:15 AM this is beautiful my friend, you paint the october mornings brilliantly...we had diamonds on the lawn this morning and frost on the windshields...i am not ready for this cold weather...your poem however was a delight to read, it flows wonderfully... :) hugs Sandra Adams October 24, 2019 at 1:05 PM My daughter’s name came from a morning like this. “ Krystyl Dawn “ Chris Green October 24, 2019 at 10:32 AM Thank you Sandy, I am thrilled you enjoyed this one. Diamonds on the lawn, I imagine that was beautiful but way too cold. : )

Brenda Chiri October 24, 2019 at 9:05 AM Very nice Chris! You do have a way of making mornings a little bit nicer. Chris Green October 24, 2019 at 10:31 AM Thanks so very much Brenda for your kind thoughts.