Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Writing poetry is not easy..It is a very challenging past time if one tries to do forms and follow some terminology..

Morning Wind

Morning wind tickled with whisper
Willows thin limbs and ancient brow.
Many days winds' chill was crisper,
Forgetful of when; can't think now

Life at times was richer, draw blank
Of those events right at this time.
Richness seems to come with each rank
Of age increase, now don't need mime

Mime one who has more worldliness.
No! Let my mime be Jesus Christ.
Let me become like him actless
Let the Spirit draw me entice

* Trying to do Tetrameter

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M.I.A . January 31, 2012 at 1:01 AM oh yes, this is simply wonderful Sara. not really sure what tetrameter is but this is very well-penned poem

Robert Johnson January 30, 2012 at 3:40 PM The wind will blow the rain and snow. The church stands still in rightous glow. As time goes on to change it's mind. The church doors open to all mankind.

Carolyn Devonshire January 28, 2012 at 2:51 PM Exquisite imagery of the wind "whispering" through the willows, Sara. I think we learn to deal with life's challenges better as we get older, but faith is essential to carrying us through these times. (I know nothing about tetrameter, but I love your poem, especially the last verse.) Best wishes in Deb's contest. Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne January 28, 2012 at 1:37 PM Lovely piece, my friend

Bl Devnath January 28, 2012 at 12:38 PM Wonderful thought of prayer, God bless you always, bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 28, 2012 at 10:30 AM simply beautiful collection of words Sara.. grand imagery in this excellent composition.. breathtaking flow..luv..

Tim B January 27, 2012 at 9:59 PM You capture with your poetic prowess Mrs. Sandra. I love that last stanza as it exemplifies what we should all yearn and strive for. I must say, I always find myself at a loss when I try to get my meter down right, so kudos for keeping an eye on it :)

Deck Fitzgerald January 27, 2012 at 8:41 PM Enjoyed this thank you Sara , Declan xx