morning walk musings

enlivened by the wafting breeze
a deep desire arose
heart was hesitant to release
rapture within that grows

walkers, runners, both young and old
shared gifts of Mother Earth
the void heard all stories untold
of both sorrow and mirth

as of our stuporous routine
we walk the path clockwise
this habit leaves some sights unseen
which we do realise

one with both the formless and form
our heart hummed a soft tune
swathed in bliss mists both cool and warm
with existence we commune

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Date: 6/20/2024 4:59:00 AM
So very much I can relate to your morning musings Unseeking Seeker! I walk must mornings and feel that I experience such similar feelings! I love my solitary walks and the opportunity they provide to explore my thoughts! A wonderfully contemplative write is this!
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Date: 6/20/2024 7:56:00 AM
Thanks Mike, delighted you enjoyed
Date: 6/19/2024 10:52:00 PM
Dear seeker this is one of my faves ever written by you, i love how observant you are and how descriptively youv delivered this! And your rhymes are always so sublime and brilliant! A fave this is for me! Its morning here and i read this now and cant help but enjoy reading this. I am also the same very observant especially in mornings. With existence as we commune, so blissful! Sending you light
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Date: 6/20/2024 12:07:00 AM
Thank you, IE dear. I penned this one today after returning from my morning walk :)
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