Morning Thirst

diamond dew drops
formed in silky web last night
spider quenches thirst

8-15-20
Contest: Haiku - Nature Themed 2
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
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Mcgee Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 2:18 PM
like a spiders journal in haiku. Congrats on a top win.
Roper Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 8:14 PM
Congratulations on your win, Larry, great imagery. Hugs Eve
Bradfield Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 9:19 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Ermine Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 4:57 PM
Cool alliteration, Larry. Warm Congratulations.
Bradfield Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 9:19 PM
Thank you!
Allison Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 4:17 PM
beautifully captured moment in haiku form. many congrats on your win Larry:-) hugs Jan xx
Bradfield Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 9:19 PM
Thank you, Jan
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 1:17 PM
Nicely done, Larry! Congrats on the win
Bradfield Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 9:20 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Kitchin Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 9:06 AM
Larry congratulations on your first place win with this excellent haiku, love the moment of nature captured with the spider web!
Bradfield Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 9:21 PM
Thank you, Tania...and thank you for the placement!!
Buehler Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 8:36 PM
A lovely haiku! Good luck in the contest. :)
Bradfield Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 6:46 AM
Thank you so much!
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