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Morning Thirst

diamond dew drops formed in silky web last night spider quenches thirst 8-15-20 Contest: Haiku - Nature Themed 2 Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 8/23/2020 2:18:00 PM

like a spiders journal in haiku. Congrats on a top win.

Date: 8/22/2020 8:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Larry, great imagery. Hugs Eve

Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/22/2020 9:19:00 PM

Thank you, Eve!

Date: 8/22/2020 4:57:00 PM

Cool alliteration, Larry. Warm Congratulations.

Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/22/2020 9:19:00 PM

Thank you!

Date: 8/22/2020 4:17:00 PM

beautifully captured moment in haiku form. many congrats on your win Larry:-) hugs Jan xx

Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/22/2020 9:19:00 PM

Thank you, Jan

Date: 8/22/2020 2:05:00 PM

I, like the spider, am thirsty for more haiku like THIS gorgeous one. Congrats to you, Larry.

Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/22/2020 9:20:00 PM

What a nice comment! Thank you, Carol

Date: 8/22/2020 1:17:00 PM

Nicely done, Larry! Congrats on the win

Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/22/2020 9:20:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Date: 8/22/2020 9:06:00 AM

Larry congratulations on your first place win with this excellent haiku, love the moment of nature captured with the spider web!

Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/22/2020 9:21:00 PM

Thank you, Tania...and thank you for the placement!!

Date: 8/15/2020 8:36:00 PM

A lovely haiku! Good luck in the contest. :)

Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/16/2020 6:46:00 AM

Thank you so much!