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Morning Surprise

In the shower stall

he presses up against me. . . 

hot steam is rising


Nov. 7, 2019  for Richard Lamoureux's Sexyku Contest

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Robert Warlov

November 17, 2019 at 9:05 AM

The prize to eyes rise. Surprised?

Kurt Ravidas

November 10, 2019 at 4:17 PM

Leslie said well. Steam is rising) Nice surprise, Andrea.

Phyllis Babcock

November 9, 2019 at 12:06 PM

Yahoo a sexy write Andrea. Hope all is well with you. love phyl

Richard Lamoureux

November 9, 2019 at 9:46 AM

Thanks for entering my contest. It was a tough one. This was a piece That was on the edge of the top 10. Hugs Rick.

Andrea Dietrich

November 10, 2019 at 7:48 PM

dang, I was on the edge? Come on, Richard!! No more premiere contests. haha

Caren Krutsinger

November 8, 2019 at 4:18 AM

Whoa! Pretty sexy for a grandma! Smile. Smile.

Robert Johnson

November 7, 2019 at 7:19 PM

Time to turn the cold water on. Me, not this situation. :)

Alexis Y.

November 7, 2019 at 6:19 PM

Hi Andrea, This is sizzling hot. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 7, 2019 at 12:31 PM

- Finally one who follows the haiku rules ... many sexy "ku" ... but not by nature - Yours are excellent, sexy and steamy, Andrea - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Annne-Lise :)