Morning Sunrise

sunrise rushes eyes
taut from night of sleepy dreams…
clumsy fingers pry

hard floor limbers feet
stiff from immobility…
quick run to bathroom

java perks real strong 
black as the ebony night…
cold bran cereal

movement is real slow
old feet and knees start to ache…
tenacious treadmill

eyelids wide open
embracing daily house chores…
anticipating

Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey
August 24, 2011

Eighth Place Winner ~ "Morning, noon, or night senryus” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: France Roberts
Sept. 20, 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 31, 2011 at 10:13 PM
Very nice Senryus here Caryl.Congrats on your win.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 10:11 PM
Congrats Caryl on an exciting win with this fascinating poetry so lovely the words my friend.. enjoy ...
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 6:29 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Sara
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 7:35 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved winning piece Caryl. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 3:16 AM
hey caryl congrats on your win , David
Roberts Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 11:33 PM
congrats Caryl on your 8th place win in the contest
Brown Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 9:36 AM
Lift your pen and let your creative words flow onto the paper Caryl. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 5:30 AM
All the best to you in the contest with this fine write.
Kendrick Avatar
August 24, 2011 at 4:34 PM
Reads like a very good morning that is filled with good things to get you awake and going..Reads like winning material to me..Good luck in the contest..Sara
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August 24, 2011 at 3:51 PM
good luck for this exquisite write...really deserving for an applause~~~smile~~~~*_* junjun
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