Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

"morning Start"

The morning light shines through my blinds...
Awakes me to a day that I hope will be kind..
First taste of coffee starts my mind flowing...
A little more sun peaks through as my room is glowing..
With a pad and pen I ponder what to write on this day..
Could be about a dream that passed through me as I lay..
Or could be a thought of the breeze that blows my curtains apart..
Or how my calendar is not so full for this Saturday start...
Might be about how the sun moves across the floor...
Or something different and new that will make my mind sore...
Well up and dressed to start this day, a little cool but then again
its only still May...

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Wilma Neels May 31, 2010 at 5:04 AM If only all our days could start in such a way.. Lovely write. Ps. Thank you for your comment on RIP, you'd be please to knw that it is a distant memory already - always :) Wilma

Andrea Dietrich May 30, 2010 at 9:33 AM VERy very nice, MIchael. A poem thinking about a poem! ARe your mays unsually cool where you are? It's been very unseasonable here, and raining immensely! LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 30, 2010 at 7:45 AM Light airy and refreshing Michael.. needed on a Sunday morning in May .. great day starter too.. appreciate your sensitivity to my latest post.. its a true story indeed .. a unique love affair for a long time now .. so it must be luv.. enjoyed your very creative write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" ..happy and safe holiday weekend.. luv..

Sarah Hales May 30, 2010 at 7:29 AM Really nice well described and thats how some of my days are like it x sarah

Solita Reed May 29, 2010 at 9:24 AM Love this! I love waking up on those days.....I'm new at soup and haven't had much time to read, but what I have so far has been great. I feel honored to be around so much talent! I look forward to reading more of your work. Hope you have a wonderful and safe weekend. Solita

Carrie Richards May 29, 2010 at 7:57 AM This could have been my own poem....my own morning......perhaps many of us have had the same sort of quiet reflection upon rising....nicely written! You took me there! :)

Carolyn Devonshire May 29, 2010 at 7:43 AM Concepts for poems do seem to fill our heads both morning and evening when we have time to rest. Sometimes, this causes me to get out of bed and put the thoughts down quickly. Well conveyed message to which many writers can relate, Michael! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A May 29, 2010 at 6:18 AM Nice way to enjoy a wake up call. Soon it will be another day before we know it. Enjoyed,..p.d.