Jeanne Mcgee Poet Verse

Morning Star

Oh Venus
My sigh of love
Above
The sky your dawn
To erase our song
Until breaks 
New morn
Blushing moon
Will swoon
Circle ‘round
Lover’s dance
Mars yours in a glance
All bow to your brilliance
Shines
Mystical star light


written:  May 21-2020
Pick-A-Title, Vol 18 - Yalto 2 - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
Title chosen:  Morning Star
3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5

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Aditi Mishra June 8, 2020 at 8:18 AM Like that starlight your words are mystical Jeanne. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)

Andrea Dietrich June 7, 2020 at 3:14 PM a lovely delightful write, Jeanne. Congrats on the win

Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2020 at 2:19 PM - The morning star is so beautiful ... congratulations on your win, Jeanne :) -hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh June 7, 2020 at 7:29 AM Amazing Yalto, Jeanne:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest!

Eve Roper May 23, 2020 at 12:38 AM I like the line,"Blushing moon Will swoon Circle ‘round".Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Jeanne Mcgee May 23, 2020 at 9:22 AM you and Caren both mentioned my favorite lines as well...thank you for the stop by.

Caren Krutsinger May 22, 2020 at 10:06 PM "circle round lover's dance" - these four words alone make it a delight Jeanne. Jeanne Mcgee May 23, 2020 at 9:21 AM yes, love is such a dance!

Judy Ball May 22, 2020 at 2:41 PM Venus. One of the most beautiful planets. Of course I love our little blue marble too. Beautiful verse here. God Bless and stay well, JB Jeanne Mcgee May 22, 2020 at 4:29 PM Hi Judy, thanks for stopping by and for the nice comments...hope you are well too. poetry sees us through...