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Morning Star

Oh Venus My sigh of love Above The sky your dawn To erase our song Until breaks New morn Blushing moon Will swoon Circle ‘round Lover’s dance Mars yours in a glance All bow to your brilliance Shines Mystical star light written: May 21-2020 Pick-A-Title, Vol 18 - Yalto 2 - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh Title chosen: Morning Star 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/8/2020 8:18:00 AM

Like that starlight your words are mystical Jeanne. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2020 3:14:00 PM

a lovely delightful write, Jeanne. Congrats on the win

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/7/2020 2:19:00 PM

- The morning star is so beautiful ... congratulations on your win, Jeanne :) -hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/7/2020 7:29:00 AM

Amazing Yalto, Jeanne:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest!

Eve Roper

Date: 5/23/2020 12:38:00 AM

I like the line,"Blushing moon Will swoon Circle ‘round".Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 5/23/2020 9:22:00 AM

you and Caren both mentioned my favorite lines as well...thank you for the stop by.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/22/2020 10:06:00 PM

"circle round lover's dance" - these four words alone make it a delight Jeanne.

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 5/23/2020 9:21:00 AM

yes, love is such a dance!

Judy Ball

Date: 5/22/2020 2:41:00 PM

Venus. One of the most beautiful planets. Of course I love our little blue marble too. Beautiful verse here. God Bless and stay well, JB

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 5/22/2020 4:29:00 PM

Hi Judy, thanks for stopping by and for the nice comments...hope you are well too. poetry sees us through...