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Morning Star

Oh Venus
My sigh of love
Above
The sky your dawn
To erase our song
Until breaks 
New morn
Blushing moon
Will swoon
Circle ‘round
Lover’s dance
Mars yours in a glance
All bow to your brilliance
Shines
Mystical star light


written:  May 21-2020
Pick-A-Title, Vol 18 - Yalto 2 - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
Title chosen:  Morning Star
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Copyright © Jeanne Mcgee | Year Posted 2020

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Aditi Mishra Date: 6/8/2020 8:18:00 AM Like that starlight your words are mystical Jeanne. Congratulations on your win. Much love :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/7/2020 3:14:00 PM a lovely delightful write, Jeanne. Congrats on the win Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/7/2020 2:19:00 PM - The morning star is so beautiful ... congratulations on your win, Jeanne :) -hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Edward Ibeh Date: 6/7/2020 7:29:00 AM Amazing Yalto, Jeanne:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest! Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 5/23/2020 12:38:00 AM I like the line,"Blushing moon Will swoon Circle ‘round".Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 5/23/2020 9:22:00 AM you and Caren both mentioned my favorite lines as well...thank you for the stop by.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 5/22/2020 10:06:00 PM "circle round lover's dance" - these four words alone make it a delight Jeanne. Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 5/23/2020 9:21:00 AM yes, love is such a dance!

Judy Ball Date: 5/22/2020 2:41:00 PM Venus. One of the most beautiful planets. Of course I love our little blue marble too. Beautiful verse here. God Bless and stay well, JB Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 5/22/2020 4:29:00 PM Hi Judy, thanks for stopping by and for the nice comments...hope you are well too. poetry sees us through...