Morning Splendour


The bamboo shades.
Fresh oranges just squeezed.
Neatly hung towels right in place,
Chrome on all appliances glistening.
Beige basket for mail.
That darling window that allows God's sunshine in.
The resplendent shining microwave.
And of course the cat on her rug.
Foevergreen eyes, looking up.
Mom on the her knees, giving a hug.


June 4, 2019
5:15am PST

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Krutsinger Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 5:09 AM
The ending is beautiful. Wow!
Romios Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 11:05 AM
Gracias! panagiota
Wolf Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 4:26 PM
Nicely done, Panagiota. I had never seen this form before. You have done it justice. Nothing like a bright, fresh morning! :) gw
Romios Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 4:39 PM
Thank you, Gershon. I felt so dumb doing this.)))) Agree on nice mornings. Wishing you peace and joy Panagiota Thanks for being a source of inspiration to me Panagiota. xoxo
Pandit Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 7:49 AM
I like the details you present in this form..they paint a picture in your words.
Romios Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 9:54 AM
Again, thank you for visiting....I did my best..)) Panagiota xoxo
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