Morning Showery Picnic Crow-

MORNING SHOWERY PICNIC  CROW-


showery cockcrow
an annual, picnic hides
because of the flies

4/7/19
written words by James Edward Lee Sr.2019 ©

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Caren Krutsinger

April 9, 2019 at 12:33 AM

Oh, my gosh, I wish I had not seen the photograph first; I cannot get "over" it. I know I read the poem, but it is overshadowed here. I will try to creep back up and look again, hoping not to see the photo. Uh-oh. Happened again. I can tell you I am no longer in a picnic mood.

James Edward Lee Sr.

April 9, 2019 at 12:48 PM

Believe it or not, it's one of those pictures... Oooh ugh!!. It's an blown-up picture of a fly in the rain...

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