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Morning Scenario

Ladies in the city, gather on street For a pot of water, they yell and fight. To sell his vegetable baskets, touts the vegetable vendor, aloud he shouts. A butterfly breaches the camaflouged pupa, stretches the wings, starts her first flight. A little boy gets persistent scoldings from papa for his low marks, stands he like an armoured knight. Waiting for customers, cobbler opens his little shop. Searching for a job, a young man wanders non stop With perturbed and prudential thoughts, swirls every mind. Caring about nothing, there on the tree, near branch twined, sings notes, a koel, from dawn to dusk

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Date: 8/7/2021 11:06:00 AM
Wow. Wonderful. The Tamil Poet Nirmala Suresh also had the same vein of writing about the morning. I enjoy reading such. Keep Posting.
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Date: 7/30/2021 6:08:00 AM
Supraja, you have used vivid, specific details to create a realistic, moving picture in "Morning Scenario"! Janice
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Date: 7/30/2021 4:47:00 AM
Hi Supraja, You've created a good scene with great imagery. I could just picture it. Well done. Have a great day. Thanks for stopping by my page:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/30/2021 1:14:00 AM
An artist would make wonders of this poem so full of images. Truly beautiful verse.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 7/30/2021 2:22:00 AM
So happy to hear such beautiful comments... Thanks a lot...
Date: 7/29/2021 10:54:00 AM
Great images you painted Supraja! Loved it especially the Joel singing. It is not bothered, it sings despite worldly choas.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 7/30/2021 2:21:00 AM
So true... It keeps on singing... Thank you so much for stopping by... Glad you liked it...
Date: 7/29/2021 10:29:00 AM
Your images take the reader to the scene you describe. Very nicely done, Supraja.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 7/30/2021 2:21:00 AM
Thank you so much for your encouraging words... Glad you liked it...
Date: 7/29/2021 9:23:00 AM
I love the scene you created in your poem of the gathering on the street. You made me see , feel, and hear all of it. Great write, Supraja.
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 7/30/2021 2:20:00 AM
Thank you so much,Eve... So glad you liked it...

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