Morning Rush

Morning Shift!
I hear my heart beats
thump!thump!thump!
like running under the sun's heats.
I feel my sweat carress my cheeks
down, down, through my sleeves
Morning Rush!

12/10/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Harrell Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 6:20 AM
We are always rushing in the morning, aren't we? Good write, Charmane. One can see the urgency in your write. Love ya, Toquyen
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November 7, 2012 at 6:22 AM
Read it the second time. Love it. Love ya, Toquyen
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November 1, 2012 at 11:15 AM
We are in such a hurry, aren't we? Charming, Charmane. Love ya, Toquyen
Bellen Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 2:02 AM
yeah such a hurry!specially going to work in a 6am shift..makes my nerves goes up!..by the way thanks for reading..hope you'll like my poems..always>>charmane
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