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Morning Rapture

ambient glow
                                                  the sun breaches the sky
                                                        morning rapture

Copyright © Terry L. Allen | Year Posted 2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/9/2012 1:52:00 PM I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Terry. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol Login to Reply Terry L. Allen Date: 5/9/2012 6:21:00 PM Thank you for remembering me and coming to review. May the happiness of a sunny day decide to hang out with you. TLee

Matthew Anish Date: 5/9/2012 8:37:00 AM You did not right a 5 -7-5 format. But it is quite sweet! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply Terry L. Allen Date: 5/9/2012 6:52:00 PM Mat it is now a 4-6-4 which is a ligitiment Haiku form. Thanks for letting me know. Terry L. Allen Date: 5/9/2012 6:23:00 PM You know what! Your right ! I was so busy learning about Haiku with my teacher that neither one of us noticed. Thanks and Thank you for your kind review. TLee

Joann Grisetti Date: 5/7/2012 4:55:00 PM Lovely morning you have given to us. Thank you. Login to Reply Terry L. Allen Date: 5/7/2012 7:14:00 PM Thank you Joann it is kind of you to say so. May you be blessed with love and warmth this day. TLee

Kash Poet Date: 5/7/2012 3:10:00 AM Excellent imagery in this haiku.Love it!! Login to Reply Terry L. Allen Date: 5/7/2012 12:43:00 PM Thanks Kash coming from you thats a real compliment. May the evening bring you ease and comfort. Huggs TLee

Ronny Madonsela Date: 5/5/2012 11:26:00 AM in evening nw , bt you got me. Craving the morning . Great one. Ronny Login to Reply Terry L. Allen Date: 5/5/2012 3:07:00 PM To wake to a new dawn a gift, to witness it's raw beauty breath taking, to share it with someone a blessing. Ronny I see you and thank you for your kind words. TLee

Terry O'Leary Date: 5/5/2012 10:22:00 AM Beautiful... Terry Login to Reply Terry L. Allen Date: 5/5/2012 3:45:00 PM To wake is the gift of another day.To witness the day awakening a view of splendor. To share such a vision with someone special a moment of rapture. May the gift of a beautiful sunrise be yours this day. TLee

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/5/2012 1:34:00 AM Good morning in a lovely haiku Terry. - oxox love Anne-Lise Login to Reply Terry L. Allen Date: 5/5/2012 4:17:00 PM I love the early morning and listening and watching the world around me slowly wake up. It is both peaceful and beautiful. Thanks Anne Lise for your kind words. TLee