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Written on 18th February – 2 days before my father died

Such precious gemstones Morning dew shines like diamonds God’s tears from heaven Written on 18th February 2 days before my father died Posted 22nd February 2015

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Date: 1/25/2019 8:28:00 AM
Very nicely written!
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Date: 11/11/2018 12:25:00 PM
Truly beautiful :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/11/2018 1:08:00 PM
Thanks for reading one of my older poems Alex:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/25/2018 10:59:00 PM
One of the beautiful haikus I've read..
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Date: 7/26/2018 4:19:00 AM
Aww you are so kind Karen, I never know if its a real haiku or not:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/27/2018 12:47:00 AM
Love the haiku :)
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Date: 4/27/2018 2:56:00 AM
thanks Debbie:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/9/2018 11:41:00 PM
Very precious, especially the timing. Awesome, Jan.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/10/2018 3:46:00 AM
I love the poem and the image I found ... but I've never grieved for my father, nor has my mother. Hugs jan xx
Date: 1/18/2018 6:08:00 PM
Again you have inspired me with your wonderful poetry, thank you Jan. Warm hugs on this so brrr cold day :-)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/18/2018 6:10:00 PM
Thanks Mick its a special poem to me:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/7/2017 9:26:00 AM
Lovely write well done simply beautiful
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Date: 3/7/2017 5:24:00 PM
Thanks Robert it is a special poem to me:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/7/2016 7:44:00 PM
Excellent Haiku.....
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Date: 12/8/2016 1:06:00 AM
Thanks Bernard it is a special poem to me:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/3/2016 11:47:00 PM
This is beautiful. I love it.
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Date: 11/4/2016 3:31:00 PM
Thanks Christian it's a very special poem to me:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/16/2016 8:29:00 PM
I love haiku. This was lovely.
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Date: 9/17/2016 6:50:00 PM
I am very fond of this poem John love the image I found to accompany it and the imagery in the poem:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/8/2016 12:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Beautiful! A 7 and fave for me! :)
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Date: 7/11/2016 5:42:00 AM
Thanks Chantelle:-) Its a very special poem to me, hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/6/2016 7:29:00 AM
Congrats Jan, for your WIN with this lovely haiku!! ;-)
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Date: 7/11/2016 5:42:00 AM
Thanks Teddy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/5/2016 3:40:00 PM
And I love the play on words !! Well done, Jan....and such a lovely illustration to compliment your poem!
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Date: 7/11/2016 5:42:00 AM
Thanks Carrie its a very special poem to me:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/4/2016 10:14:00 PM
Hello Lovely Jan, thank you for entering my contest and checking out my blog. :) I was moved by your entry. After you read all my entries, you will see this was the only short poem that made my list... Congratulations.... Love LINDA
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Date: 7/11/2016 5:43:00 AM
Thanks Linda I thinbk its one of my favourite haiku poems:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/4/2016 10:02:00 PM
It is nice to see this on the winners list Jan...Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 7/11/2016 5:43:00 AM
Thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/4/2016 9:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win......
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Date: 7/11/2016 5:44:00 AM
Thanks Janis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/2/2016 7:55:00 PM
This is beautiful Jan. I really enjoyed reading your write. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes - Liz
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Date: 7/4/2016 3:29:00 PM
Thanks so much Liz this is a very special poem and was written 2 days before my father died:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/9/2016 4:47:00 PM
Special Poem - Congrats on your 3rd place win in the "Any Poem You Ever Penned" poetry contest. I enjoyed your work - Jesse
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Date: 6/9/2016 4:56:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by Jesse:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/8/2016 10:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jan ! Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/9/2016 4:55:00 PM
Thanks so much Eve this is a very special poem was written just a few days before my dad died:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/29/2016 2:01:00 PM
Awesome gem. I deliberately scrolled to find your haiku, so as to get keen on the form. Thank you. Have more to edit. Blessings galore and have a wonderful cozy weekend. The passing of your Dad reminds me of the passing of my Mom.
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Date: 1/29/2016 2:20:00 PM
Aww thanks Iris - I never know if I have written a 'real' haiku I prefer to call them three line poetry:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/18/2015 3:36:00 PM
Interesting poem. I didn't get home until the day after my father died.
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Date: 7/18/2015 3:48:00 PM
we got there about 15 minute after he passed. Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/28/2015 9:36:00 PM
Nice haiku Jan, SKAT
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Date: 3/1/2015 3:22:00 AM
Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 2/25/2015 8:59:00 PM
lovely image, very apt title, puzzling and intriguing but it's a wow read! :),,,,,,,,, my sincerest condolences Jan.. hugs..olive eloisa!
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Date: 2/26/2015 1:52:00 AM
Thanks Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/25/2015 1:15:00 PM
Lovely haiku, Jan; and many other lovely comments down below that show that people care. hugs // paul
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/25/2015 1:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/25/2015 2:17:00 AM
such depth of emotion and so much more. God's tears indeed. Cheers
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/25/2015 2:20:00 AM
Thanks so much Uwe:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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