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Morning Note

. Beautiful brown eyes Bridging your soul to mine Smooth silky light caramel skin Glistening with sweetness and purity within A smile that could warm the heart on the coldest day Warmth and passion radiates the beauty from your face Versatile stylish hair…long, short, afro, curls or twists Eloquent, classy, beautiful, sexy all falls short in your presence There are no words comparable or even describable that could ever be used God’s blessing, an angel’s melodic song, or Christmas morning bliss are respectfully you

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/29/2009 7:27:00 AM

A classic treat of linguistic cornucopia ... quite post modern ... with effective rhythm style ... love it.

Jonay Washington

Date: 5/26/2009 11:38:00 AM

omg so cute! and no imma be on the soup for a very long time no worries! ahah i love thispoem tho and the way you have it laid out very unique niiice=]]TinkBabyy

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/20/2009 8:42:00 PM

This is magical and elegant and romantic and sweet all the biggies with such a vivid description of someone who is love and admired. Thank you for your kind comments on my work, always apprecaited.

Sue Mason

Date: 5/20/2009 11:09:00 AM

Great writing here in tribute to a lucky person ... thanks for being at the Soup, Juan

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/18/2009 5:52:00 PM

First, a note of hopefully helpful information. If you want "Beautiful Brown Eyes" to be on top of the "Tree", simply put a period . in front of the B in the word beautiful. Then, use the space bar to move the line into place leaving the dot at the edge of the paper. Experience is talking here...I hope it helped. Now for the poem. (Smiling) What a wonderful poem of love. Very sweet, Juan. Keep writing. DAS-J