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Morning Note

.                                            Beautiful brown eyes
                                          Bridging your soul to mine
                                       Smooth silky light caramel skin
                                Glistening with sweetness and purity within
                         A smile that could warm the heart on the coldest day
                        Warmth and passion radiates the beauty from your face
                          Versatile stylish hair…long, short, afro, curls or twists
                    Eloquent, classy, beautiful, sexy all falls short in your presence
           There are no words comparable or even describable that could ever be used
    God’s blessing, an angel’s melodic song, or Christmas morning bliss are respectfully you

Copyright © Des Juan Richardson | Year Posted 2009

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L'Nass Shango Date: 5/29/2009 7:27:00 AM A classic treat of linguistic cornucopia ... quite post modern ... with effective rhythm style ... love it. Login to Reply

Jonay Washington Date: 5/26/2009 11:38:00 AM omg so cute! and no imma be on the soup for a very long time no worries! ahah i love thispoem tho and the way you have it laid out very unique niiice=]]TinkBabyy Login to Reply

Charlene Bird Date: 5/20/2009 8:42:00 PM This is magical and elegant and romantic and sweet all the biggies with such a vivid description of someone who is love and admired. Thank you for your kind comments on my work, always apprecaited. Login to Reply

Sue Mason Date: 5/20/2009 11:09:00 AM Great writing here in tribute to a lucky person ... thanks for being at the Soup, Juan Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 5/18/2009 5:52:00 PM First, a note of hopefully helpful information. If you want "Beautiful Brown Eyes" to be on top of the "Tree", simply put a period . in front of the B in the word beautiful. Then, use the space bar to move the line into place leaving the dot at the edge of the paper. Experience is talking here...I hope it helped. Now for the poem. (Smiling) What a wonderful poem of love. Very sweet, Juan. Keep writing. DAS-J Login to Reply