Des Juan Richardson Poet Rhyme

Morning Note

.                                            Beautiful brown eyes
                                          Bridging your soul to mine
                                       Smooth silky light caramel skin
                                Glistening with sweetness and purity within
                         A smile that could warm the heart on the coldest day
                        Warmth and passion radiates the beauty from your face
                          Versatile stylish hair…long, short, afro, curls or twists
                    Eloquent, classy, beautiful, sexy all falls short in your presence
           There are no words comparable or even describable that could ever be used
    God’s blessing, an angel’s melodic song, or Christmas morning bliss are respectfully you

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L'Nass Shango May 29, 2009 at 7:27 AM A classic treat of linguistic cornucopia ... quite post modern ... with effective rhythm style ... love it.

Jonay Washington May 26, 2009 at 11:38 AM omg so cute! and no imma be on the soup for a very long time no worries! ahah i love thispoem tho and the way you have it laid out very unique niiice=]]TinkBabyy

Charlene Bird May 20, 2009 at 8:42 PM This is magical and elegant and romantic and sweet all the biggies with such a vivid description of someone who is love and admired. Thank you for your kind comments on my work, always apprecaited.

Sue Mason May 20, 2009 at 11:09 AM Great writing here in tribute to a lucky person ... thanks for being at the Soup, Juan

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen May 18, 2009 at 5:52 PM First, a note of hopefully helpful information. If you want "Beautiful Brown Eyes" to be on top of the "Tree", simply put a period . in front of the B in the word beautiful. Then, use the space bar to move the line into place leaving the dot at the edge of the paper. Experience is talking here...I hope it helped. Now for the poem. (Smiling) What a wonderful poem of love. Very sweet, Juan. Keep writing. DAS-J