Hathor Ammutlinra Poet Couplet

Morning, Noon, Night

To many numbers on the clock.
Bug eyed over my watch.
Counting every second as life goes by.
One million tear drops fall from the sky.
Can't close my eyes even if you sing me a nursery rhyme.
Can't stop the clicking of the time.

Like a nurse, a curse I hold my own pulse.
For one second my heart froze.
Kingdom come heavens done.
Out numbered by everyone.
A fatal stream for Lin~Ra the queen.
Rebellious I proceed in the hourglass of my dream.

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Beata Agustin June 24, 2024 at 3:22 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed."

Tim Smith July 18, 2016 at 9:53 AM sweet

Poet Destroyer A February 15, 2016 at 3:08 PM hathor, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Poet Destroyer A December 11, 2013 at 1:36 AM morning noon, night :-)

Poet Destroyer A November 21, 2012 at 10:03 PM Lin`RA,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Jay O'Neal June 23, 2011 at 5:02 AM Nice write! I can't stand it when I dream of being in a dream awake.