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Morning Mist and Summer Rain

Morning Mist and Summer Rain Far away from the noise of the city I walked in the quiet of a country lane nothing to distract me this day but the morning mist, turning into a summer rain. I was born to be free from my troubles born to smell the freshness of the day nothing to accompany me on my trip but the morning mist, turning into a summer rain. There are times when I must be free, away from the cares and worries of this life, when I can walk alone in this world with nothing but the morning mist, turning into a summer rain. Sometimes in all my wanderings I talk with my God up above, it's amazing what I will hear, when walking in a morning mist, turning into a summer rain. A symphony of sounds are present from the creatures who live nearby, from the call of a coyote drifting on the wind to the birds in their nests where they lie, all add to the beauty of this day, when filled with nothing but a morning mist....turning into a summer rain. My love for life is all around given by a God who cares from up above, it is seen most clearly on a country lane when walking in a morning mist, turning into a summer rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/4/2012 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Richard. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2011 5:27:00 PM
praise the Lord for such a beautiful way of presenting Himself :)
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Date: 12/12/2011 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Richard. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 4:27:00 PM
Ah, so soft and lovely, the kind of walk I love to take. It is filled with such tenderness and feeling. A joy to read.
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Date: 6/14/2011 8:24:00 PM
Very beautifully written; peaceful and energizing
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Date: 6/9/2011 6:56:00 PM
It sure is, and we all need that bit of time to ourselves to remember that. What a lovely write! The return of the last line in each stanza makes it complete. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 6/9/2011 5:36:00 AM
This is Stunning....such a poet...
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