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Morning Miracle

Sun surprises moon Startles her with light and flame Frightens her away Then spreads wide his arms And creates a new morning Miracle complete

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Date: 8/17/2024 8:50:00 PM
These are amazing haiku. I like how it knits the haikus into a story
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 8/18/2024 8:48:00 AM
Thanks, Hilda.
Date: 8/17/2024 7:12:00 PM
Love those morning miracles! Aptly spoken!
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 8/18/2024 8:48:00 AM
Kim, thanks.
Date: 8/17/2024 11:46:00 AM
this is lovely, jim!
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 8/18/2024 8:48:00 AM
Thank you, Ilene.

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