Morning Miracle

Sun surprises moon
Startles her with light and flame
Frightens her away

Then spreads wide his arms
And creates a new morning
Miracle complete
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Greenhough Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 8:50 PM
These are amazing haiku. I like how it knits the haikus into a story
Slaughter Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 8:48 AM
Thanks, Hilda.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 7:12 PM
Love those morning miracles! Aptly spoken!
Slaughter Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 8:48 AM
Kim, thanks.
Bauer Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 11:46 AM
this is lovely, jim!
Slaughter Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 8:48 AM
Thank you, Ilene.
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