Morning In the Valley

sun bleeds
over hill
morning whispers
soft
rain fades
sky clears
enlightenment
reflections
more than I see
reflections
enlightenment
clears sky
fades rain
soft
whispers morning
hill over
bleeds sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 6:50 PM
aha, it is one of those backwards poems. I forget what they used to call that kind but one person did a contest on it one time. Very nicely done.
Bayles Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 7:21 PM
Thanks, I'm glad you like it. The poetic form is palindrome.
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