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Morning Haiku

Dawn is a feeling
Our goal is finding the truth 
Our gaze turns inward

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Terry L. Allen

May 9, 2012 at 6:35 PM

My teacher tells me that I should never have more than 2 main focal points and by his standards this has 5. I like what it says though. TLee

December 10, 2011 at 9:14 PM

So much truth in this one and sometimes that truth takes a bit of soul searching. Nice message. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

May 29, 2011 at 1:06 AM

Matt, tell me what you discussed about the ten lost tribes. Where do you think they are? soupmail me if you want. Happy Memorial Day. Luv, Andrea

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

May 7, 2011 at 8:42 AM

Very well thought out, and rightfully put. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on "Scentsational Spring". I have reviewed it and made some change. Hope it is better now. Thanks again. Caroline.