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Morning Haiku

Dawn is a feeling Our goal is finding the truth Our gaze turns inward

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Terry L. Allen

Date: 5/9/2012 6:35:00 PM

My teacher tells me that I should never have more than 2 main focal points and by his standards this has 5. I like what it says though. TLee

Date: 12/10/2011 9:14:00 PM

So much truth in this one and sometimes that truth takes a bit of soul searching. Nice message. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2011 1:06:00 AM

Matt, tell me what you discussed about the ten lost tribes. Where do you think they are? soupmail me if you want. Happy Memorial Day. Luv, Andrea

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/7/2011 8:42:00 AM

Very well thought out, and rightfully put. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on "Scentsational Spring". I have reviewed it and made some change. Hope it is better now. Thanks again. Caroline.

Robb A. Kopp

Date: 4/15/2011 9:47:00 AM

I enjoyed softly reading your pen strokes

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/3/2011 12:12:00 PM

One must look inward to find himself on the way to finding truth! Awesome, Matt. Happy weekend, or what's left of it. Always, Annalise

James Foulk

Date: 4/2/2011 9:44:00 PM

a nice piece you wrote here, enjoyed reading it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2011 12:16:00 AM

Wonderfully said, Matt.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/27/2011 3:57:00 PM

Nice bit of introspection here, Matthew. Hope you are doing well! Love, Carolyn