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Morning Grief

Each night he is stout, imperishable	
Conviction built of granite
When he awakes… sheer gloom

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Gwendolen Song

January 30, 2012 at 6:49 AM

Hi Natalie,,,I see you are on a lil break from poetry..I wanted to invite you to write for my Dr. Seuss is on the Loose contest bc you are the Rogue Rhymer! Hope your New Year's is off to a fabulous start! Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

January 21, 2012 at 4:55 PM

haha, he sounds like a night owl like me. Thanks for your comments on my 80's poem. I loved your gag me with a spoon line, that is one I actually used!!

Gwendolen Song

December 20, 2011 at 10:23 AM

I know I've read this one ..must have forgot to comment. Are we married to the very SAME MAN? Could it be?!! ha ha. A wonderful contrasting type of kimo. Chris will eat this one up!! ha Hey, I read Harry's Vet Visit poem which completely broke my heart and discovered that u had a great pyrinese. Wow..love those dogs but my home is teanie tiny! I walked one in a parade years ago and loved every minute of it! Please share....or write a poem for me about him. lol. Gwendolen

Kenny A Fledgling Poet

December 19, 2011 at 4:56 PM

Natalie, Wow You helped me have a little more understanding of the Kimo form of Poetry.You are very versatile in Your Poetry. I'm trying an Acrostic for Francines Contest. How long will it take me to learn all the Forms when I do not even understand most Forms of Poetry. Respectfully kenny

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

December 18, 2011 at 10:00 AM

I really like that second line of yours, Natalie! and the contrast in that third line really made it interesting! Wish you the best in Chris' contest! :D