Morning Grief

Each night he is stout, imperishable Conviction built of granite When he awakes… sheer gloom

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/30/2012 6:49:00 AM

Hi Natalie,,,I see you are on a lil break from poetry..I wanted to invite you to write for my Dr. Seuss is on the Loose contest bc you are the Rogue Rhymer! Hope your New Year's is off to a fabulous start! Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2012 4:55:00 PM

haha, he sounds like a night owl like me. Thanks for your comments on my 80's poem. I loved your gag me with a spoon line, that is one I actually used!!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/20/2011 10:23:00 AM

I know I've read this one ..must have forgot to comment. Are we married to the very SAME MAN? Could it be?!! ha ha. A wonderful contrasting type of kimo. Chris will eat this one up!! ha Hey, I read Harry's Vet Visit poem which completely broke my heart and discovered that u had a great pyrinese. Wow..love those dogs but my home is teanie tiny! I walked one in a parade years ago and loved every minute of it! Please share....or write a poem for me about him. lol. Gwendolen

Kenny A Fledgling Poet

Date: 12/19/2011 4:56:00 PM

Natalie, Wow You helped me have a little more understanding of the Kimo form of Poetry.You are very versatile in Your Poetry. I'm trying an Acrostic for Francines Contest. How long will it take me to learn all the Forms when I do not even understand most Forms of Poetry. Respectfully kenny

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/18/2011 10:00:00 AM

I really like that second line of yours, Natalie! and the contrast in that third line really made it interesting! Wish you the best in Chris' contest! :D

Rick Parise

Date: 12/17/2011 8:06:00 PM

Excellent write....I love the many thoughts that flow with this write//heavy//profound!!!just what a write should have!!!!!!A winner for sure~Good day you new car/poetic chic you.....

Lisa Cooper

Date: 12/17/2011 6:37:00 PM

great piece. it flows easily off the tongue. Many blessing and good tidings to the coming holiday to you and yours!