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Morning Greeting

Even though your bones creak When you stumble from bed Thinking, in the fog of the morn What kind of day lies ahead? With a splash of cold water The morning routine complete It’s then off to the kitchen To find something to eat. Crusty flaky and warm It sits waiting for me The morning now complete A scone with my tea!

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Date: 10/22/2016 7:49:00 AM
Hello, Good write really, no need for changes but if it were mine... You start off in the third person then change to the first. In many instances this can be used to great effect. However in this short work I would be tempted to have it first person all the way.
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Date: 10/22/2016 5:14:00 AM
Oh, I love this! This simple joys of each moment. Thank you for sharing. W.
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