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Morning Delight

Dawn brews morning delight, a hot cup of sunshine dolloped with creamy clouds. I yawn and stretch my hands to take a sip of such glorious morning that boosts me with joie de vivre. Date: 01/14/2016 Note: For the contest 263 by Brian Strand. Not Placed :=(

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/16/2017 4:44:00 AM

It is indeed a delight to enjoy a cup of Joe or tea in the morning. This poem has great merit regardless of non placement. I got five N/A's in a row so I can relate! ; ) 7

Afzal Nusker
Date: 5/18/2017 9:02:00 AM

Connie thank you very much for your encouraging words. Means a lot to me.

Funom Makama

Date: 3/6/2017 11:16:00 AM

Great work, really inspiring and incredible.

Afzal Nusker
Date: 3/6/2017 9:54:00 PM

Thanks Funom.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/27/2017 6:38:00 PM

I'm not really a morning person myself, but I did enjoy the comforting and rejuvenating feeling I got from your poem... Nicely penned, Afzal!

Afzal Nusker
Date: 2/27/2017 9:41:00 PM

Thank you, Kelly.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/20/2017 5:49:00 AM

This is excellent, Afzal, regardless of not placing:) a 7 from me:)

Afzal Nusker
Date: 1/20/2017 6:15:00 AM

Thank you very much, Jo.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/16/2017 10:42:00 PM

Nice to wake up in comfort of the Dawn, very nice verse and refreshing :-)

Afzal Nusker
Date: 1/16/2017 10:52:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/16/2017 10:49:00 AM

What a lovely mood to start off the new day, Afzal! This is metaphorically delightful! Regards // paul

Afzal Nusker
Date: 1/16/2017 10:53:00 PM

Thank you very much, Paul.

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/15/2017 7:34:00 PM

Such lovely imagery of 'morning delight' metaphorically presented, Afzal. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra

Afzal Nusker
Date: 1/15/2017 9:26:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/14/2017 4:20:00 PM

Very succulently delicious poem, Afzal. It was good to the last drop. Any fruit juice in the morn will give me a boost of joy of life. Very sweet poem, nicely done. Love and peace to you.

Afzal Nusker
Date: 1/14/2017 10:26:00 PM

You sweetened my heart with your sugary comments, Freddie. Thank you very much for being so kind.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/14/2017 12:31:00 PM

Hi Afzal, I'm not a big coffee drinker but after reading this divine write , I'll have what you're having. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis

Afzal Nusker
Date: 1/14/2017 10:24:00 PM

I bet you would like it. Lol! Thank you so much for such a gracious compliment, Alexis.