Afzal Nusker Poet Verse

Morning Delight

Dawn brews morning delight,
     a hot cup of sunshine
          dolloped with creamy clouds.
I yawn and stretch my hands
     to take a sip of such
          glorious morning that 
boosts me with joie de vivre.


Date: 01/14/2016

Note: For the contest 263 by Brian Strand.
         Not Placed :=(

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Connie Marcum Wong May 16, 2017 at 4:44 AM It is indeed a delight to enjoy a cup of Joe or tea in the morning. This poem has great merit regardless of non placement. I got five N/A's in a row so I can relate! ; ) 7 Afzal Nusker May 18, 2017 at 9:02 AM Connie thank you very much for your encouraging words. Means a lot to me.

Funom Makama March 6, 2017 at 11:16 AM Great work, really inspiring and incredible. Afzal Nusker March 6, 2017 at 9:54 PM Thanks Funom.

Kelly Deschler February 27, 2017 at 6:38 PM I'm not really a morning person myself, but I did enjoy the comforting and rejuvenating feeling I got from your poem... Nicely penned, Afzal! Afzal Nusker February 27, 2017 at 9:41 PM Thank you, Kelly.

Joanna Daniel January 20, 2017 at 5:49 AM This is excellent, Afzal, regardless of not placing:) a 7 from me:) Afzal Nusker January 20, 2017 at 6:15 AM Thank you very much, Jo.

Eve Roper January 16, 2017 at 10:42 PM Nice to wake up in comfort of the Dawn, very nice verse and refreshing :-) Afzal Nusker January 16, 2017 at 10:52 PM Thank you so much, Eve.

Paul Callus January 16, 2017 at 10:49 AM What a lovely mood to start off the new day, Afzal! This is metaphorically delightful! Regards // paul Afzal Nusker January 16, 2017 at 10:53 PM Thank you very much, Paul.

Sandra Haight January 15, 2017 at 7:34 PM Such lovely imagery of 'morning delight' metaphorically presented, Afzal. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra Afzal Nusker January 15, 2017 at 9:26 PM Thank you, Sandra.

Freddie Robinson Jr. January 14, 2017 at 4:20 PM Very succulently delicious poem, Afzal. It was good to the last drop. Any fruit juice in the morn will give me a boost of joy of life. Very sweet poem, nicely done. Love and peace to you. Afzal Nusker January 14, 2017 at 10:26 PM You sweetened my heart with your sugary comments, Freddie. Thank you very much for being so kind.

Alexis Y. January 14, 2017 at 12:31 PM Hi Afzal, I'm not a big coffee drinker but after reading this divine write , I'll have what you're having. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis Afzal Nusker January 14, 2017 at 10:24 PM I bet you would like it. Lol! Thank you so much for such a gracious compliment, Alexis.