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Morning Delight

Dawn brews morning delight,
     a hot cup of sunshine
          dolloped with creamy clouds.
I yawn and stretch my hands
     to take a sip of such
          glorious morning that 
boosts me with joie de vivre.


Date: 01/14/2016

Note: For the contest 263 by Brian Strand.
         Not Placed :=(

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Connie Marcum Wong Date: 5/16/2017 4:44:00 AM It is indeed a delight to enjoy a cup of Joe or tea in the morning. This poem has great merit regardless of non placement. I got five N/A's in a row so I can relate! ; ) 7 Login to Reply Afzal Nusker Date: 5/18/2017 9:02:00 AM Connie thank you very much for your encouraging words. Means a lot to me.

Funom Makama Date: 3/6/2017 11:16:00 AM Great work, really inspiring and incredible. Login to Reply Afzal Nusker Date: 3/6/2017 9:54:00 PM Thanks Funom.

Kelly Deschler Date: 2/27/2017 6:38:00 PM I'm not really a morning person myself, but I did enjoy the comforting and rejuvenating feeling I got from your poem... Nicely penned, Afzal! Login to Reply Afzal Nusker Date: 2/27/2017 9:41:00 PM Thank you, Kelly.

Joanna Daniel Date: 1/20/2017 5:49:00 AM This is excellent, Afzal, regardless of not placing:) a 7 from me:) Login to Reply Afzal Nusker Date: 1/20/2017 6:15:00 AM Thank you very much, Jo.

Eve Roper Date: 1/16/2017 10:42:00 PM Nice to wake up in comfort of the Dawn, very nice verse and refreshing :-) Login to Reply Afzal Nusker Date: 1/16/2017 10:52:00 PM Thank you so much, Eve.

Paul Callus Date: 1/16/2017 10:49:00 AM What a lovely mood to start off the new day, Afzal! This is metaphorically delightful! Regards // paul Login to Reply Afzal Nusker Date: 1/16/2017 10:53:00 PM Thank you very much, Paul.

Sandra Haight Date: 1/15/2017 7:34:00 PM Such lovely imagery of 'morning delight' metaphorically presented, Afzal. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra Login to Reply Afzal Nusker Date: 1/15/2017 9:26:00 PM Thank you, Sandra.

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 1/14/2017 4:20:00 PM Very succulently delicious poem, Afzal. It was good to the last drop. Any fruit juice in the morn will give me a boost of joy of life. Very sweet poem, nicely done. Love and peace to you. Login to Reply Afzal Nusker Date: 1/14/2017 10:26:00 PM You sweetened my heart with your sugary comments, Freddie. Thank you very much for being so kind.

Alexis Y. Date: 1/14/2017 12:31:00 PM Hi Afzal, I'm not a big coffee drinker but after reading this divine write , I'll have what you're having. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis Login to Reply Afzal Nusker Date: 1/14/2017 10:24:00 PM I bet you would like it. Lol! Thank you so much for such a gracious compliment, Alexis.