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Morning Comes

sun rests on mountain preparing to flood valley as morning is born Haiku for Raul's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/13/2010 1:06:00 AM
I LOVE this haiku, Very visual. AS for the end line poem, I always enjoy those kinds of things. My mind just loves the challenge of them. But I am not so good with haiku (Notice how I am avoiding the sunset contest!) LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/12/2010 1:58:00 PM
I like the image of this valley being "flooded" with morning sun, Margaret. Great haiku!! Best wishes for success in Raul's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/11/2010 7:47:00 PM
An excellent Haiku for Raul's Contest, Margaret! Beautiful picture! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 2/11/2010 6:24:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku...enjoyed...Good luck in the contest...Marty
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