Morning Comes

sun rests on mountain

preparing to flood valley

as morning is born




Haiku for Raul's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 1:06 AM
I LOVE this haiku, Very visual. AS for the end line poem, I always enjoy those kinds of things. My mind just loves the challenge of them. But I am not so good with haiku (Notice how I am avoiding the sunset contest!) LUv, Andrea
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February 12, 2010 at 1:58 PM
I like the image of this valley being "flooded" with morning sun, Margaret. Great haiku!! Best wishes for success in Raul's contest. Love, Carolyn
Haick Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 7:47 PM
An excellent Haiku for Raul's Contest, Margaret! Beautiful picture! Peace, love, Audrey
Owens Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 6:24 PM
Beautiful Haiku...enjoyed...Good luck in the contest...Marty
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