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Morning Cleansing

MORNING CLEANSING Nightmares portend calamitous outcome Masks of doom pretend to breathe Nettles hang on morning shower rods Nightmares dissipate behind steamed doors 11/3/2017

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/4/2017 8:50:00 AM

Well crafted expression of a much needed shower. Bravo.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/4/2017 7:30:00 AM

Creative, original thoughts of the morning!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/4/2017 7:48:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay! What looks huge and scary at night, often dissipates in morning light.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 11/4/2017 7:06:00 AM

Great imagery- you describe the feeling very well. I hate waking with this feeling of dread; thankfully, it does dissipate upon getting up.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/4/2017 7:49:00 AM

Thanks, Agnes! Most things have a fix by morning.