Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Morning Cleansing

MORNING CLEANSING

Nightmares portend calamitous outcome
Masks of doom pretend to breathe
Nettles hang on morning shower rods
Nightmares dissipate behind steamed doors

11/3/2017

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Line Gauthier November 4, 2017 at 8:50 AM Well crafted expression of a much needed shower. Bravo.

Vijay Pandit November 4, 2017 at 7:30 AM Creative, original thoughts of the morning! Kim Rodrigues November 4, 2017 at 7:48 AM Thank you, Vijay! What looks huge and scary at night, often dissipates in morning light.

Agnes Krampe November 4, 2017 at 7:06 AM Great imagery- you describe the feeling very well. I hate waking with this feeling of dread; thankfully, it does dissipate upon getting up. Kim Rodrigues November 4, 2017 at 7:49 AM Thanks, Agnes! Most things have a fix by morning.