Morning Canvas

Analogous sky,
Morning light sketches mountains:
Pastel horizons.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 1:42 AM
Reminds me of a beautiful Spring morning .. and Raul ..your words are a canvas of lovely paintings full of vivid and vibrant colors in words... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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February 23, 2010 at 1:33 PM
It is a true compliment to be chosen, especially by a true practioner of the form as yourself. I admire your unique photograph tieins. Are you the phptographer? If so, you are truly talented. If not, you have expectional taste. Regards, Gerard.
Bourner Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 7:29 PM
glorious haiku! i love it :) ------Ell
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 4:09 PM
I love this one!
Kendrick Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 1:24 PM
Interesting write in this Haiku. I especially like the middle line. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Thanks for the placement in Awaiting Dawn from the many great entries. Sara
Haick Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 8:30 PM
You are so very talented, Raul. But you already know this! Peace, Audrey
Chircop Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 2:23 PM
These Horizons are magical Raul..I wonder where you live to get inspired this way... a beauty..Charma
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February 19, 2010 at 1:20 PM
As you sit beneath your favorite tree and write these haikus, Raul, you bless the reader with so much serenity. Thank you for brightening our day with "pastel horizons." Love, Carolyn
Mckenzie Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 12:58 PM
Raul~Your sure do have a way with words! A winning piece! Laura :)
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February 19, 2010 at 12:48 PM
Wonderful piece, are you entering the competition too??? REgards: Déirdre Ó Maidín
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