Morning Brings Mourning

Purpose calmly ends.
Dew fed tears collect past life,
wetting forest floor.


For Mourning Calm contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 29, 2015 at 5:36 PM
JHON, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page during the last week of 2015 and beginning of 2016 :) awesome way to start the year... Enjoy the coming Year.... SKAT
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April 24, 2010 at 11:58 PM
Nice win, JOhn, congratulations
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April 24, 2010 at 5:25 PM
Congratulations on your in in Raul's contest "Mourning Calm" JT. Love, Carol
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April 24, 2010 at 9:12 AM
Nice use of imagery and personification for a creative perspective. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Have a nice weekend. Karen
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April 23, 2010 at 8:29 PM
John, congrats on your success in my contest..Raul
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April 23, 2010 at 1:17 PM
What an interesting perspective on this piecture. Much to think about in your poem. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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April 23, 2010 at 10:31 AM
Good luck in the contest, enjoyed the image,,Irma
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