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Morning Breaks

Morning Breaks Madness attended, donning grayish, flowing robes Over the seductive scent of humid lust, Rippling through the ghost like flash dance Needy with the thirst for sun’s fulfillment. Insatiably moistening pursed, begging, lips No longer coy vixen, playing cat and mouse but Greedy harlot - opening – awaiting - seeking Breath of morning lights false dawn, Rekindling lust’s longing after sunset affair. Ecstasy, trembling beneath the thinning robes, Awaiting the tantalizing touch, the golden Kiss, the full lipped brush of day’s forgiveness, Soothing love’s ache as Morning Breaks. John G. Lawless 6/25/2014 for Francine Roberts Summer Acrostic contest

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Date: 8/11/2014 6:35:00 PM
I'm shocked this didn't make the cut John...would have placed high with me...thanks for the comment on mine as well
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Date: 6/28/2014 1:36:00 PM
wowowow, an amazing personification in this acrostic. I LOVE this one. A 7 for sure.
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Date: 6/26/2014 10:01:00 AM
Great metaphorical poem in Acrostic form,
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