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Morning Baptism

Sprinkled by the dew,
Nature’s purification:
Flowers born again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/10/2009 6:53:00 PM
Peaceful and elegantly put, flowers born again, awesome line.
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:44:00 PM
nature baptizing its own!!very nice...
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:17:00 PM
Last line feels like waking up @.@ thanks for sharing =D
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Date: 9/6/2009 7:07:00 PM
Interesting imagery especially the opening line. The title works well with your message. I like how you use the idea of baptism and carry some concept of it in each of the three lines. Thoughtfully put together. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen
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Date: 9/6/2009 11:25:00 AM
Beautiful poetry Raul, great imagery in such few words! ~jen~
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Date: 9/6/2009 8:57:00 AM
What a beautiful Haiku Raul !!! How much more can one say !!! james
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Date: 9/6/2009 6:01:00 AM
This is excellent and the imagery is great. I can see it clearly. Here in Wisconsin we are now planting bulbs for the spring because winter is fading away and the frost is here. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 9/6/2009 12:29:00 AM
A sweet verse Raul.One for the favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments today
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Date: 9/6/2009 12:12:00 AM
interesting Haiku----charma
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Date: 9/5/2009 5:51:00 PM
beautiful thoughts! Raul!...and thanks always for your encouragement! I treasure your comments!...jim
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Date: 9/5/2009 5:09:00 PM
Nice title and Haiku. Methodist sprinkle and the Baptist dunk. I am Baptist but I like the ideas anyway. Sara
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