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Morning Baptism

Sprinkled by the dew,
Nature’s purification:
Flowers born again.

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Tyler Martin

September 10, 2009 at 6:53 PM

Peaceful and elegantly put, flowers born again, awesome line.

Abe Lopez

September 7, 2009 at 6:44 PM

nature baptizing its own!!very nice...

Cesar Cantu

September 7, 2009 at 6:17 PM

Last line feels like waking up @.@ thanks for sharing =D

September 6, 2009 at 7:07 PM

Interesting imagery especially the opening line. The title works well with your message. I like how you use the idea of baptism and carry some concept of it in each of the three lines. Thoughtfully put together. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

Jen H.

September 6, 2009 at 11:25 AM

Beautiful poetry Raul, great imagery in such few words! ~jen~

James Peranteau

September 6, 2009 at 8:57 AM

What a beautiful Haiku Raul !!! How much more can one say !!! james

Joseph Spence Sr

September 6, 2009 at 6:01 AM

This is excellent and the imagery is great. I can see it clearly. Here in Wisconsin we are now planting bulbs for the spring because winter is fading away and the frost is here. Great job! ~Joseph