Morning

Morning or mourning?
One brings joy the other pain.
Difference is you.

good morninghaiku

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Akkina Downing

May 16, 2017 at 11:02 AM

This is great and I love the ending :)

Phil Capitano

May 17, 2017 at 4:34 AM

Thank you. This is another of my poems with multiple meanings (its my super power, lmao). I appreciate your comments. Namaste.

John Michaels

April 8, 2017 at 7:24 AM

Very clever little Haiku. Am deeply impressed with your multiple meanings / play on words. Regards, John!

Phil Capitano

April 8, 2017 at 8:25 AM

Thanks for the kind words and for visiting. Ciao.

Vladislav Raven

March 20, 2017 at 11:15 AM

Hi Phil, i do love Haiku so i had to drop in on this one. Love the concept, well written Haiku Phil. I have to give it a seven and it goes into my Haiku faves. Your Friend....Mike.

Phil Capitano

March 20, 2017 at 12:36 PM

Thanks Mike, of course, this has a triple meaning;(1) you make the difference in how the day is approached, (2) "u" is the difference between the two words and (3) "you" is the other person in your life that makes the difference. Glad you liked it.