Morning

Piercing white yellow
Diamonds on sea - sparkling
Winter trees shaping
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 9:01 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Liz. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 11:31 PM
Congrats Liz on your featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful write to share luv..
Heckman Avatar
December 26, 2010 at 11:42 AM
beautiful words and images
A   Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 2:06 PM
Awesome, Liz! Enjoyed the image of the sun rays touching the ocean waters in to sparkling diamonds. Enjoyed ,..p.d.
Smalling Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 7:00 AM
You can paint a landscape for me anytime ... stay inspired, my friend
Devonshire Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 8:19 AM
I love the reference to "diamonds on sea." The ripples in the ocean do seem to sparkle that way at sunrise, Liz. Very nice haiku! Love, Carolyn
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September 1, 2010 at 8:11 AM
lovely, much enjoyed
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