Maria Fernandez-Garcia Poet Rhyme

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Morning

Melting with the sun
            between the sea
              and the sand
        smelling the jasmine
                    it's fun.
        No lights on the beach,
         no waves on the sea,
       We look for somebody 
                  to preach
                We give up, 
                  we sleep.
            We want to see 
               the morning
             to be complete

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Gordon Mcconnell July 13, 2023 at 2:04 PM Thanks Maria for following me, I heard it's very hot in Spain just now, it was nice and sunny a few weeks ago here but now it's cloudy with some showers last week we had thunder and lightning with heavy showers. Welcome to PS, hope you are enjoying it here. Take care, Gordon Maria Fernandez-Garcia July 13, 2023 at 2:42 PM Very hot. I prefer a little bit cooler. And I am in the northwestern area, where is not as hot as the South, but still hot. I would prefer to stay up there in the Highlands next to one of those beautiful lakes. Anyway Gordon...Such a nice pleasure to meet you. Have a nice evening...!

Gordon Mcconnell July 13, 2023 at 12:07 PM Lovely pen Maria with nice imagery and insightful line of thought, also nice rhyme and flow too. Blessings from Scotland, Gordon Maria Fernandez-Garcia July 13, 2023 at 1:04 PM Thank you Gordon. I appreciate it. Nice in Scotland right now? Here is burning the sun. Hugs from Spain

Darlene De Beaulieu July 10, 2023 at 3:54 PM Hello Maria, this is beautiful . the each has no lights My fav. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\ Darlene De Beaulieu July 11, 2023 at 4:30 AM Hello Maria, Hello my friend Maria You are so welcome. I will enjoy my day thank you. Hugs. I just woke up it is morning. Hugs. \ Darlene/ Maria Fernandez-Garcia July 10, 2023 at 4:14 PM Hello my beloved nightingale Darlene. Thank u so much. I will write to u very soon.. Have a nice afternoon there. Here is late. Going to sleep. Kisses