Morning

The orient rays through the tree tops
Illuminating the foliage,shades of green
Sieving through the mist, hallowing land.
My mind wakes to an soothing breeze

Meadows crowned by myriad dews
Glittering to welcome the morning sun-
That tickles the hillside limpid stream-
Giggling through the lea to the fields.

A stork waiting stealthily calm
While crabs shelter under pebbles
A snowy swan swims across
Making ripples by its webbed feet.

The ridges far off in the canvas
A silhouette of a sleeping giant
Nonchalant of its murky feet-
As the sun peeps through its side.

Parrots in pairs flying thru the golden ray
Spotted far off in the sky waxing blue
The calves sprinting curiously away
with careful care their mothers graze.

The squirrels swift on the branches
wagging brushy tails sniffing for nuts
we haven’t lost the paradise yet,I vouch
But gone miles away on our own choice
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 11/30/2019 9:02:00 AM
You did far better than just try. I have enjoyed my peek into your creativity. Let me know when you post a new piece. Blessings Rick.
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Date: 11/29/2019 7:37:00 AM
Beautifully expressed. ;0)
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Johnson Vdev
Date: 11/29/2019 8:01:00 PM
I did experience these mornings in my younger days . This canvas imprinted in me no words are enough to paint. But tried. Thanks
Date: 11/22/2019 12:41:00 PM
Again, Johnson. This one takes me for a ride.
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Date: 11/13/2019 11:18:00 PM
we haven’t lost the paradise yet... Nature is the artist and you are the canvas.. Beautifully penned..
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Date: 11/14/2019 11:52:00 AM
Thanks for the encouragement
Date: 11/13/2019 10:42:00 PM
so much beauty... wow... Ann
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Johnson Vdev
Date: 11/14/2019 11:53:00 AM
Thanks a lot
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