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Morning

The morning was so playful It woke me from my dreams Asked if I'd come out to play Making my smile beam
Just me being silly! I was bored!;)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 9/10/2019 4:29:00 PM
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Hey Brenda, you're needing to get bored more often if this is it's effect, a really fine penned piece. This is so true of mornings effect upon us so many times.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/10/2019 9:45:00 PM
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Lol thank you so much Gordon!;)
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 9/10/2019 12:26:00 AM
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Wow!! A refreshing piece :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/10/2019 8:49:00 AM
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Thank you!;)
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/9/2019 3:31:00 PM
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Bored or not, it is the positivity shining through that impresses me most, Brenda. Not too many people wake up with a lovely smile:) Warm regards // paul
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/9/2019 9:01:00 PM
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Ah thank you so much Paul I do enjoy your visits! You are too kind!;)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2019 1:39:00 PM
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- Brenda, it feels like a great way to wake up ... playful :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/9/2019 1:49:00 PM
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Thank you Anne-Lise! ;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/9/2019 11:50:00 AM
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i like that this could be taken different ways. cleverly penned...nothing wrong with playful mornings :) hugs
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/9/2019 12:02:00 PM
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Ahh see leave to another woman to catch that!;) thanks so much!;)
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Winged Warrior
Date: 9/9/2019 9:15:00 AM
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Lovely said my sissy poo lol...hope all is well...bro bro :o)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/9/2019 9:49:00 AM
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Bro bro all is good here I'm happy to say! Same with you I hope!;) thank you so much for stopping by!;)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/9/2019 8:45:00 AM
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A great way to start my day. Silly is often underrated. Hugs Rick.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/9/2019 9:49:00 AM
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Silly is underrated isn't it! Lol! Thank you so much Rick!;)
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John Fleming
Date: 9/9/2019 2:40:00 AM
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Here is a jolly nice way to wake up to the new day...all very delightful, Brenda. In affection. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/9/2019 9:48:00 AM
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Thank you so much John! Glad I could help you to wake in a good mood!;) all my. Affection!;)
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Matthew Anish
Date: 9/8/2019 7:16:00 PM
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Nice wake - up poem! Cheerful and bright! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/8/2019 8:19:00 PM
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Thank you Matthew that's so kind of you! Appreciate your comment!;)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/8/2019 11:02:00 AM
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So sweet, Brenda!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/8/2019 11:14:00 AM
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Ahh thx Kim so much!;)

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