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Morning


The morning was 
so playful 
It woke me from 
my dreams
Asked if I'd come 
out to play
Making my 
smile beam




Just me being silly! I was bored!;)

Copyright © Brenda Chiri | Year Posted 2019

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Gordon Mcconnell

September 10, 2019 at 4:29 PM

Hey Brenda, you're needing to get bored more often if this is it's effect, a really fine penned piece. This is so true of mornings effect upon us so many times.

September 10, 2019 at 9:45 PM

Lol thank you so much Gordon!;)

Swetha Vangaveti

September 10, 2019 at 12:26 AM

Wow!! A refreshing piece :)

September 10, 2019 at 8:49 AM

Thank you!;)

September 9, 2019 at 3:31 PM

Bored or not, it is the positivity shining through that impresses me most, Brenda. Not too many people wake up with a lovely smile:) Warm regards // paul

September 9, 2019 at 9:01 PM

Ah thank you so much Paul I do enjoy your visits! You are too kind!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 9, 2019 at 1:39 PM

- Brenda, it feels like a great way to wake up ... playful :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

September 9, 2019 at 1:49 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise! ;)

September 9, 2019 at 11:50 AM

i like that this could be taken different ways. cleverly penned...nothing wrong with playful mornings :) hugs

September 9, 2019 at 12:02 PM

Ahh see leave to another woman to catch that!;) thanks so much!;)

September 9, 2019 at 9:15 AM

Lovely said my sissy poo lol...hope all is well...bro bro :o)

September 9, 2019 at 9:49 AM

Bro bro all is good here I'm happy to say! Same with you I hope!;) thank you so much for stopping by!;)

Richard Lamoureux

September 9, 2019 at 8:45 AM

A great way to start my day. Silly is often underrated. Hugs Rick.

September 9, 2019 at 9:49 AM

Silly is underrated isn't it! Lol! Thank you so much Rick!;)

September 9, 2019 at 2:40 AM

Here is a jolly nice way to wake up to the new day...all very delightful, Brenda. In affection. :) john

September 9, 2019 at 9:48 AM

Thank you so much John! Glad I could help you to wake in a good mood!;) all my. Affection!;)

September 8, 2019 at 7:16 PM

Nice wake - up poem! Cheerful and bright! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

September 8, 2019 at 8:19 PM

Thank you Matthew that's so kind of you! Appreciate your comment!;)

September 8, 2019 at 11:02 AM

So sweet, Brenda!

September 8, 2019 at 11:14 AM

Ahh thx Kim so much!;)

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