Moribund Mirage

vast arid desert
cold solitary existence
plush silky sand dunes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 9:26 PM
I enjoyed this one too. Why cold if it is desert? Love the silky sand dune line!
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January 4, 2011 at 11:35 AM
Images are clear and bright in this well descriptive piece....enjoyed...........Michael
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January 4, 2011 at 11:17 AM
Howdy Stephen: I REALLY like this poem...BRAVO!!! Someday I hope to live in Arizona. I you have a great day. Peace: Sheol
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