Heather Ober Poet Footle

More Wine Please

Dinner for Two:
Red wine
Fine dine

Dessert for Two:
White wine
Cloud nine

Liquid Courage:
More wine
More spine

Liquid Stupidity:
Chug wine
Cross line

The Perfect Gift:
Bring wine
Be mine

Where It All Began:
Pre-wine
Grape vine

The Next Morning:
Post-wine
Most whine

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Painted Hunter February 28, 2013 at 1:51 PM Haha...ok...liquid stupidity, chug wine, cross line had me cracking up...I was picturing you downin' a bottle and raising hell...this was so fun to read! Heather Ober March 1, 2013 at 11:43 AM Haha I'm glad you liked it! I have definitely been known to partake in a little wine once in awhile!

Charles Clive February 10, 2013 at 3:23 AM A worthy winner. And thank you for your comments. I really appreciated the feed back from your Competition. Charles.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair February 10, 2013 at 1:39 AM Very creative and brilliant, Heather, Congrats!! Jag

Poet Destroyer A February 9, 2013 at 9:01 PM Heather, Congratulations on a job well done, in Yasmin's footle fun contest:-) take care~PD

Kim Merryman February 9, 2013 at 6:42 PM Glad to see you in the winner's circle. Congrats on your 1st place win, Heather! Love, Kim

Tim Ryerson February 9, 2013 at 2:16 PM Bet you were not 'Sober-Ober' by the time you finished this, Heather...I'm sure you had a bottle available for each footle?...All were hilarious but the hangover footle is my favorite...Congratulations my friend! - Tim

Debra Squyres February 9, 2013 at 12:26 PM Ohh these are good. I guess I should have given each of mine a title as well for them to be a real footle...per definition. Congrats on your win... More wine?? Raise a toast !!!

Debbie Guzzi February 9, 2013 at 11:36 AM Congrad's on your fun win. Just loved these Heather. [I once was in love with a Steven Ober from Brooklyn NY!] Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich February 9, 2013 at 10:55 AM Yours was one of my favorites all along. BIG congrats in the contest.

Len Gasun February 9, 2013 at 9:40 AM Congratulations my dear poet friend Heather on your awesome win. I’ve truly enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you so much! Love/hugs, Leonora

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 9, 2013 at 8:02 AM Loved these first time round too well done Heather xx

Pace Ink-U-Script February 1, 2013 at 12:50 PM Excellent title..grabbed my attention as well as this write of yours..I'll be on stand-by to see what you placed in the contest.."1st" regards INK-U-SCRIPT :)

Charmaine Chircop January 28, 2013 at 12:33 AM Excellent poem..keep your thoughts flowing.Welcome to ps

Andrea Dietrich January 27, 2013 at 5:24 PM thanks for your comments today. i always love reading what you have to say. I don't think I will find a poem of yours to read and I need to hurry off for the day, but hopefully you will have a new one up soon. Luv, Andrea

Jack Horne January 26, 2013 at 2:41 PM lol, great footles - congrats on your wins, my friend

Andrea Dietrich January 26, 2013 at 8:55 AM THIS is how it is DONE!!!! I love this series. You hit it out of the park, my friend!!!

Even Flow January 26, 2013 at 1:56 AM I love this, such a light and easy read but very clever. It made me smile a lot especially the liquid stupidity verse. I am getting a lot of pleasure from your work, thank you.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 25, 2013 at 6:36 AM brilliant love them xx

Sean Goodwin January 24, 2013 at 11:28 PM Yes very nice. Thoroughly enjoyed reading'em. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks for commenting on my haiku. -- Sean

Kim Merryman January 24, 2013 at 10:03 PM Good job, Heather! These are good! Love, Kim

Jack Ellison January 24, 2013 at 8:50 PM Great "Footle Fun" my dear Heather! Got a kick out of it... hugs, Jack xox

Richard Lamoureux January 24, 2013 at 7:03 PM This is fantastic! You my dear are a clever girl.

Russell Sivey January 24, 2013 at 6:38 PM This is a wonderful write Heather! I really loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a beautifully written piece! I loved in particular the 'Dessert for Two', "White wine, Cloud nine" part! Great Work!!