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More Time

With a long, hazy gaze I knew the images in your head How peculiar thought, An instinct I didn't comprehend. And we were too engrossed with time somehow looking far and away, I imagined your peach-like nape Flushed like a blooming petal Softly lifting my eyes, and wishing for another taste of more days.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/13/2014 4:05:00 PM
I like the mystery of your piece.. ohh, the waiting can be unbearable, gabby... superbly done.. thanks for coming around.. huggs
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Date: 9/13/2014 2:49:00 PM
Beautiful write! I really enjoyed this wonderful piece with amazing imagery! Well done. Pandita
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