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More Thoughts Things Destined Things wished forgotten, have found beginnings to a conquering love dream... Awake Facing darkness - I move through finding light and freedom in my mind... Dream Fantasies Innocent kisses, found charm and desire. that sparkle an illusion of love... White Roses I will paint my life in blue, but I will pick white roses for you...
06/12/ 2014 By Lucilla M. Carrillo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Vaso Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 9:09 PM
My thoughts on this are, amazing, outstanding, perfection in poetry!!
Deschler Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 10:59 PM
Very charming!.... I really enjoyed this second set of wonderful random thoughts. I really liked those last few lines about the white roses.... Another beautiful write, Lucilla!
Carrillo Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 2:03 AM
Thank you for reading these too.
Smith Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 6:48 PM
How wonderful are these thoughts...I love white roses... Hugs Tim
Carrillo Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 8:22 PM
hank you Tim, you can have a whole bunch of them. I have them in my garden. Blessings always....
Andresen Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 2:18 PM
- Beautiful .... especially the last two lines!! - Continue with your beautiful thoughts. - <3 to you my dear friend Lucilla! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Carrillo Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 2:59 PM
Thank you AnneLise, I couldn't think of nothing to write. I'm glad you like them.
Nance Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 12:59 PM
i like that line, I paint my life in blue, but I will pick white roses for you. :) awesome Lucilla :)
Mehta Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 9:46 AM
Nice introspection with the self on fee,lings, Lucilla
Carrillo Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 10:31 AM
Thank you so much Dr. Ram
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