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More Than What I See

when you see life what do you see? i see all the things it wishes to be i see the potential of a perfect world but that is just the opinion of a dying girl we have diseases and death all around kids getting raped and beat to the ground what is see in life isnt what i want to see but i see the pain and how life is treating me if you are young dont live to fast you can drink and smoke but the fun wont last a peive of advice appreciate life dont miss an oppertunity to take a pencil and write about how you are preciuos and can be what you want to be you are lifes own lifeline you are more then what they see you are you!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/24/2009 10:05:00 AM
This one is a positive reminder that life can be what you make it in spite of the hardships. I like this. Great advice for all the kids I work with. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 2/4/2009 7:47:00 AM
you r right. . people need to take the time and see there self. . nice write. . .best wishes~ *Breana
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Date: 1/14/2009 12:27:00 PM
You're right you are more than what others see. Great job Arianne. Laurie
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