More Than Love New Addition

MORE THAN LOVE
I've looked in eyes so blue they made me soar
through all the gifts of life, this much and more
to challange me to things that could not be
unless had been aroused the very soul of me.

I've seen the smile that makes the heart to sing
and raise me to the best that life can bring
to be the very most that I can ever be
and write each word her smile has ever put in me.

I've breathed the very same and fragrant air
and for a moment had this thing to share
with she, who made my life to soar above
the limits of my own, and more than love.

I just want to be the one
I just want to be the one you love.

That's how I feel about you.

I just want to be the one.

© ron wilson aka Vee Bdosa the Doylestown Poet

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Rob Carmack

December 29, 2016 at 9:22 AM

This perfect, such balance and power. I am glad I found this today.

Vee Bdosa

November 25, 2016 at 6:43 AM

Thank you CayCay, response like this is what keeps us going. It is a beautiful feeling to know our writing touches someone else's life. Thhis particular poem, an early one in my poetry writing experience, is one of my most popular.