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MORE THAN LOVE I've looked in eyes so blue they made me soar through all the gifts of life, this much and more to challange me to things that could not be unless had been aroused the very soul of me. I've seen the smile that makes the heart to sing and raise me to the best that life can bring to be the very most that I can ever be and write each word her smile has ever put in me. I've breathed the very same and fragrant air and for a moment had this thing to share with she, who made my life to soar above the limits of my own, and more than love. I just want to be the one I just want to be the one you love. That's how I feel about you. I just want to be the one. © ron wilson aka Vee Bdosa the Doylestown Poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/29/2016 9:22:00 AM
This perfect, such balance and power. I am glad I found this today.
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Date: 11/25/2016 6:43:00 AM
Thank you CayCay, response like this is what keeps us going. It is a beautiful feeling to know our writing touches someone else's life. Thhis particular poem, an early one in my poetry writing experience, is one of my most popular.
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Date: 11/25/2016 2:45:00 AM
Your words captured me, the beauty and feel were universal as made real to me by your muse. I am moved ... CayCay
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