More Than An Inferno

It is not light that falls before these eyes, blue as ocean's dream, that allows me to see, beyond such a simple breeze where whitest whites make way for jaded bliss a brilliance brighter than my sun or of your moon it is honey that coats the tongue but vision that makes one feel gracing of soul as Beatrice's special guest honoured it is no guess pools of luscious honeydew pull and I drown in the elixir floating free with petals of persimmon the heavens call for our return co-joined we shine bright brighter than 10,000 stars blocking out distracting light letting our peace perform then shine "What then I saw is more than tongue can say. our human speech is dark before the vision. the ravished memory swoons and falls away. as one who sees in dreams and wakes to find the emotional impression of his vision still powerful while its parts fade from his mind - just such am I, having lost nearly all the vision itself, while in my heart I feel the sweetness of it yet distill and fall" Excerpt from Dante's Inferno
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Date: 11/15/2019 8:56:00 AM
This is beautiful.. What a lovely poem.
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Date: 11/15/2019 6:41:00 PM
Thank you Fun
Date: 11/9/2019 6:16:00 PM
you have outdone yourself TS fave fave fave its a breath taking poem:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/9/2019 7:05:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan...hugs
Date: 11/9/2019 3:09:00 PM
Stunning. Surely one of the best writers, I have had the pleasure of collaborating with, ever. Surely one of the best in The Soup. Beautiful thoughts and story TS. Leanne.
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Date: 11/9/2019 4:58:00 PM
Thank you dearest Leanne, your compliments light up the night. TS xx
Date: 11/9/2019 12:10:00 PM
Really excellent TS, breathtaking, I am impressed. Love, Panagiota
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Date: 11/9/2019 12:43:00 PM
Thanks my friend PR, my muse has gifted my pen with elegance of late.
Date: 11/9/2019 9:04:00 AM
Your piece is a great companion piece to your excerpt from Dante’s inferno. Like pairing the perfect wine.
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Date: 11/9/2019 9:26:00 AM
Thank you for the high compliment Rick, it is much appreciated.
Date: 11/9/2019 7:20:00 AM
https://youtu.be/E7VgstsVS44
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Date: 11/9/2019 3:35:00 PM
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