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8/31/2025 for More Than A Soft Toy Poetry Contest sponsored by Natasha L Scragg

More than a Soft Toy

I suppose everyone likes to be loved and comforted, and, it seems, one of the best ways to convey love is through a soft touch.  Love is best when it is shared, and a toy is always there, ready to receive and give love as needed.

Honestly though, the only animal toy I remember from my childhood is the monkey puppet at my grandmother's house, once a toy of my dad's.  My grandmother noticed I liked it so much that she let me take it home.  The glint in its realistic eyes made it seem alive with its own personality.  I never named him, but today, I'll call him Sparky.   

Later, when my son was a toddler, he was given a cute cream-colored stuffed bear that was just about his size.  We gave him a pair of my son's hand-me-down overalls, and my son affectionately named him Starpoint.  

So, I hope you enjoy these two poems, written specifically for this evening's poetry recital.

Ode to Sparky

I found my monkey in a toy filled box
along with some old-fashioned wooden blocks. 
He laid in that dark place for forty years,
but his bright eyes bore happiness, not tears. 
He was a faithful friend, while I did grow. 
I took him to school for a puppet show.
A primo companion, above all others -
with a guy like him, who needs brothers?

Ode to Starpoint

I guess I never knew you all that well.
Twas in my son's young heart that you did dwell.
You were just as cute and big as my son -
no wonder he picked you to be the one
to be his special companion and friend,
to whom this sole honor he would extend -
you're the only bear (wherever you are)
to be named after the point of a star.
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Goldsmith Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 11:10 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun monkey and bear write. I had both as a young child. Two great animals. Have a fun day with your win as you go writing away..........
Crandall Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 3:06 PM
Thanks, Paula, agreed - two great animals! I still have the monkey, and I think, but I'm not sure, the bear is somewhere around here.
Godwin Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 10:51 AM
Very sweet, seems true, as well. Didn't know you had a son, if this is true. All of the entries I've read thus far FEEL true but who knows for sure? I enjoyed your reading your entry, David. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Crandall Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 11:05 AM
Thanks, CayCay - yep, in a strange departure, this one's 100% true. My son is 33 years old.
Greenhough Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 8:57 PM
Both poems are sincere and touching. Good luck in a contest if these poems.are for one.
Crandall Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 11:04 AM
Thanks Hilda! Yup, this is for a contest.
Edmonds  Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 5:55 PM
Two lovely odes in memory of sparky and Starpoint… Beryl
Crandall Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 6:04 PM
Thanks Beryl - finally Sparky gets a name - not as good as Starpoint though. I think that's an inspired name.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 5:20 PM
how nostalgic and cute....a fabulous contest entry. Best wishes with the contest, enjoy your week, Sara
Crandall Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 6:04 PM
Thanks Sara, I had actually forgotten about that puppet show until I wrote the poem.
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