More Than 3 - But Less Than 5

Our Solar System's planets spin like ours-
    but few are 'rocky' ones that share our stars,
        like Venus, Mercury, our Earth, and Mars.

For life to grow and thrive on our Earth here,
    we need key elements upon its sphere:
        earth, water, air, and fire- must persevere.

Each month, our Moon, with us, plays hide and seek
    with phases that are spaced and quite unique:
        Full Moon, Last Quarter, New, First Quarter streak.

 Within twelve months, each quarter they appear-
    we call them Seasons, and they grant us cheer;
        Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter- fill our year.

On this huge Earth, we need help traveling-
    to Cardinal directions we need cling,
        for North, South, East, and West's unraveling.

For peace- books of the Bible steer our course
    in times of happiness and in remorse;
        Mark, Matthew, Luke, and John- faiths reinforce.


February 2, 2020

Contest: What's In a Number
Sponsor: Juliet Ligon

Rules: Represent the number 4 
without using the word 'four'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Callus Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 4:53 PM
I truly like your take on this number theme, and your rhyme also is worthy of note. Sandra. Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 7:36 AM
Congratulations! Well done.
Allison Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 7:20 PM
excellent examples representing four, congrats on your win Sandra its so lovely to see you back posting:-) hugs Jan xx
Ligon Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 6:50 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my "What's In A Number" contest! With beautiful flow, you gave foundational examples of the number four.
Watt Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 6:45 PM
Sandra, more wonderful creative poetry coming from your carefully cadenced pen! Well done on capturing many of the elements we associate with "4" and congrats on your #1 placement! ~ John
Buehler Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 11:47 PM
Very lovely, Sandra! Good luck in the contest. :)
Haight Avatar
February 16, 2020 at 2:50 PM
Thank you very much, Evelyn, for stopping by! I appreciate your lovely comments! Hugs, Sandra
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