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More of a Woman

Would I be more of a women If I held my thoughts, If I remained silent, If I cooked instead of talk? Would I be more of a women If I ironed your shirt, If I took all your mess, If I didn't hesitate to lift my skirt? Would I be more of a women If I took things sittting down, If I let you walk over me, If I kept my head down? Would I be more of a women If I let you yell at me, If I let you hit me, If I still praised you on my knees? Would I be more of a women If I put up with your attitude If I let you disrespect me If I let you treat me rude? Would I be more of a women If I had long beautiful hair If I had a twenty inch waist If I was okay with you having a spare? Would I be more of a women If I remained unaware If I seen no wrong in you If I just didn't care? Would I be more of a women If I tamed my voice If I hid my individuality If I gave up my right of choice?

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Date: 9/15/2011 7:03:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Shayla. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 9/14/2011 10:03:00 PM
WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP.. SO ENJOYED READING YOUR CREATIVE POETRY TONIGHT.. ENJOY THE SITE AS U SHARE WORDS WITH LUV..
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Date: 9/14/2011 2:43:00 PM
NO...NO...NO!!!
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