Jeff Connelly Poet Shape

More Like a Shot Glass

forging this long lustful loving line into luck

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art                                                     mm
 by                                                   ha
 ply                                                gh
  ing                                            ou
   this                                        en
     sen                                      t
        ten                                ho
           ce                             en
             in                          wh
               to                      en
                  a                   th
                    very hot fire
it
in
to
a
ho
rse
shoe
for luck

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Richard Lamoureux September 9, 2019 at 10:08 AM Tequila should remove the rust no problem.

Richard Lamoureux September 5, 2019 at 8:41 AM Now where did I leave that bottle of tequila? Jeff Connelly September 5, 2019 at 5:45 PM It is a lucky horse shoe Richard!!!

Jeanne Mcgee September 4, 2019 at 8:23 AM I had to hammer my brain into a shot glass this morning and hope to fill it with lots of poetry. Cute! Jeff Connelly September 4, 2019 at 11:02 AM Thanks Jeanne. Disclosure: No drinking was involved in the making of this poem. I was really trying to make a horse shoe, but must always remember the Chaos Factor.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 4, 2019 at 7:32 AM Ahhh enjoyed! Thank you for the neuroplasticity!!!! xomo Jeff Connelly September 4, 2019 at 11:03 AM I'm glad it wasn't negative plasticity Maureen.