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More Like a Shot Glass

forging this long lustful loving line into luck i sta er art mm by ha ply gh ing ou this en sen t ten ho ce en in wh to en a th very hot fire it in to a ho rse shoe for luck

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/9/2019 10:08:00 AM

Tequila should remove the rust no problem.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/5/2019 8:41:00 AM

Now where did I leave that bottle of tequila?

Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/5/2019 5:45:00 PM

It is a lucky horse shoe Richard!!!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/4/2019 8:23:00 AM

I had to hammer my brain into a shot glass this morning and hope to fill it with lots of poetry. Cute!

Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/4/2019 11:02:00 AM

Thanks Jeanne. Disclosure: No drinking was involved in the making of this poem. I was really trying to make a horse shoe, but must always remember the Chaos Factor.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/4/2019 7:32:00 AM

Ahhh enjoyed! Thank you for the neuroplasticity!!!! xomo

Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/4/2019 11:03:00 AM

I'm glad it wasn't negative plasticity Maureen.